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As she died

August 23, 2023
By Sunflowergirl GOLD, Mansfield, Texas
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Sunflowergirl GOLD, Mansfield, Texas
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“This week I've been reading a lot<br /> and doing little work. That's the way<br /> things ought to be. That's surely the<br /> road to success.” -Anne Frank

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I held her as she fell, as the bullet disrupted all life around us, as her warm blood seeped through her clothes and mine, as she looked desperately into my eyes until she couldn't, and as I screamed my grief like my very own soul was being torn apart. 

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