Colorado | Teen Ink


November 1, 2008
By Anonymous

I was swinging all alone. I could hear it squeak as I went up and down. A cold breeze ran through my bones as a tear rolled down my face. As usual I had been thinking about you. You said my name. My swing had almost completley stopped. I was dropping tears constantly.

But then I felt something give me a push. ImmediatelyI picked my chin up. I waited until I had stopped moving. I looked back, and there you were. I said your name leaping from my seat and into your open arms. I was crying with joy. We hugged. I never wanted to let you go again. If only that moment would have lasted forever, just like our love.

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This article has 6 comments.

on Dec. 11 2017 at 9:53 pm
DarkPoet SILVER, Crosby, Texas
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i love it nice work

on Apr. 5 2014 at 12:59 pm
Pinkwolf156 BRONZE, Cournna, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Practice makes perfect

that was the best one i ever heard, it reminded me of me and my love!!!!

on Nov. 21 2013 at 9:19 am
babygirl102903 BRONZE, Bellevue, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
when i ran all i wanted was for you to come after me

awwww i write love peoms all the time. you are really good at it keep doing these poems<3

CarolElaine said...
on Dec. 9 2009 at 12:25 pm
Sweet...I love happy endings!

librarylady said...
on Dec. 9 2009 at 9:52 am
Visually stimulating and touching.

on Sep. 29 2009 at 6:08 pm
HBCdance BRONZE, Ann Arbor, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself. Above all, let who you are, what you are, what you believe, shine through every sentence you write, every piece you finish." - John Jakes

Short and sweet; I love it. Perfect.