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One Thursday Morning

July 28, 2013
By Aairow BRONZE, New York, New York
Aairow BRONZE, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
dizzy up the girl


Writers block. I start a sentence, I erase. I get sidetracked, I stop writing. And then I think about how people fall in love. How they learn about each other, how they breathe their lovers flaws, and study their movements. The gaze in their eyes, the way their heartbeat seems to calm down right when they reach the peak of their excitement. And I think about how I love and how differently it feels. I think about how the more I know about you the more I hurt. I think about those chilly summer mornings we spent at your mothers’ house in England. I remember waking up next to you, our bodies laced in your borrowed white silk duvet. I looked out the window. Your room overlooked a beautiful botanical garden across the path. You turned over in your sleep and I peered down wondering if you ever bothered to wake up this early, to watch the sun rise and cast golden rays on the narcissuses. And I thought that you probably didn’t and would never. And I thought about how you said you couldn’t be bothered with those things. And I thought about how you laced up your shoes so tight and talked about life, like it was a schedule. And how you slowly killed me with deadly phrases like “be realistic". And I thought about how the more I knew about you, the more I felt like I’ve made a mistake. And I thought about how I didn’t love you. And suddenly, you woke up, and you stared and asked me what I was doing up so early and I just sighed and said “nothing".


The author's comments:
It's about growing up, having so many expectations about love and life, and realizing that reality calls for action and that all actions warrant consequences

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_Kaye said...
on Nov. 9 2014 at 6:24 pm
You're seriously talented, and like the other reviewer said, I can hear your voice in this piece. Will there be a continuation? I'm subscribing just incase you decide to drop part 2 w/o telling me.

Kam_ko said...
on Sep. 5 2013 at 10:53 am
WOW.  I was lost at first but those last couple of sentences really hit me.  This is so real it's rediculous and the revelation of it all is all too familluar.  Wonderfully put together, I hear your voice in it :)

Lilly said...
on Sep. 5 2013 at 7:48 am
one of the most beautiful pieces I've read yet. My only critique is that it isn't long enough.