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August 2022 Fiction Contest: Puddle

August 25, 2022
By syruskf SILVER, San Marcos, California
syruskf SILVER, San Marcos, California
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Favorite Quote:
"It's only time, it won't age like wine<br /> But it's mine and I'll take the blow"


Stepping outside into the blue hell, I raise my head and feel my skin get painted. I’m but a balloon whose string is wavering, forever upwards. In the first one, I see the iridescence failed to see from the ground. Not white, but luminous. Quick adjustment, I become one and float, watching patiently. Where are you? Is the thought of us in paradise revolting? I'm here waiting, lost, but you neglected. The blue hell now fades, the iridescence turning to gray, and gently, I reach the ground with the water, allowing myself to drown in the puddle of my own creation.


The author's comments:

Regarding hope

 

Commas are sublime


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Afra ELITE said...
on Sep. 18 2022 at 5:52 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
103 articles 7 photos 1824 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

This was so good!!!