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Halloween Night

October 2, 2014
By BobBob BRONZE, Kings Mountain, North Carolina
BobBob BRONZE, Kings Mountain, North Carolina
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It is the night of halloween. Bob was so excited to go out and get candy and to show off his scary costume to his friends. When it became dark he started putting on his costume and waited for his friends to arrive. “Dont be out to late , dont talk to anyone you know, and don't go to the creepy old house on top of the hill” his mom said. His mom trusted them not to go to the creepy old house on top of the hill. what she didn't know was that they planned to go up there to see why people thinks its so creepy. Bob , Tom,  Bill, and Tim went to all the houses that had the good candy. When they were done they decided to go ahead and go up to the creepy old house. They thought they were so cool because they were going up to the old creepy house without permission. They were walking on the dark dirt road and all of a sudden they heard something in the woods, they all jumped then started laughing when a bunny hopped out of the woods. The wind whistled as it blowed.  The closer they kept gettin to the creepy old house the scareder they kept getting.            They made it to the house. It was falling apart, the windows were broken, paint was coming off. As they walked up the steps the doors opened with a “cree eekk”
When they walked into the house, a burst of cold air hit them.. “Burrrr” Bob said.. “I dont like this p..p..place” Tim said. “You scared of everything” Bill said. Tom added “even a little tiny bug”. “Okay , okay guys lets stop making fun of Tim and explore the house.” Bob said.. They thought they heard a noise upstairs, so they decided to go up and look. At first they didnt see or hear anything.. Then all of a sudden.. This loud BOOM  came from down stairs.. They ran out of the room, when they got out of the room they seen this shadow going into this room..They went into the room and what they seen was horrible… They seen a little girl sitting there. She looked up, when she did she had bright red glowing eyes. They ran to the door when they got there, the door slammed closed.. They screamed and banged on the door.. “LET US OUT” they all screamed.. The door finally opened and they ran down stairs. Tim tripped and rolled down the stairs, they other boys giggled..
They got to the front door. It was locked. They couldn't get Out. All of the doors and windows was locked. “We shouldn't have came here” whined Tim. They opened the basement door. A burst of cold air came out.. “BURRR”. They walked into the basement , the door slammed shut. Once again they ran to the door to open it, it wouldn't come open. “You are NOT getting out of here” the creepy little girl evilly laughed.. The little girl tortured them, by baning on walls, scraping the walls, throwing things up the stairs. The boys couldn't see her, they didn't know if she was near them or not. they were terrified.
At least an hour had past, nothing was going on for at least the last 15 minutes… But then all of a sudden the little girl blew on Bobs head.. He screamed to the top of his lungs. The door finally reopened. They went to the front door to try to get out, they screamed “HELP US” and banged on the door as loud as they could..
Bobs mom expected them to be back by now, she went out looking for them. she couldn't find a single one of them. “oooohhh no they must be at the old creepy house”. She called the cops an Tims, Toms, and Bills parents and they went out to the house. They heard the little boys in the house screaming for help. They ran up to the house and tried opening the door but it wouldn't open. It was 20 minutes later when the door finally opened. They boys ran out of the house. They face was as white as a ghost. They each ran to the parents and hugged them and wouldn't let go. The cops and parents asked them “what  happened in there?” . They looked at each other and didn't say a word.


The author's comments:

You should listen to the thing parents tell you or bad things might happen.


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