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Civil War

August 3, 2011
By Vareesha12 ELITE, Troy, Michigan
Vareesha12 ELITE, Troy, Michigan
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I’m trying to pass off as someone I’m not, trying to seem like I FEEL but I don’t. I don’t really get sad or happy or angry. It’s not numbness, it just takes a lot more to get me emotional. It’s a battle from my nature which is very perfectionist tidy and all that and what I chose, to be free spirited and wild and messy. And it’s like they’re fighting each other for control and I just want to tell my selves to shut up and get along because you’re tearing me apart.


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on Aug. 15 2011 at 11:14 pm
BreeTayler PLATINUM, Carlisle, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"Where there is love there is life." --Ghandi

Ahhh... Ok, that's understandable lol I get it:)

on Aug. 15 2011 at 10:26 pm
Vareesha12 ELITE, Troy, Michigan
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It is more of a prose piece. Thank you, it is just how I feel. Trying to put myself into words(:

on Aug. 15 2011 at 9:20 pm
BreeTayler PLATINUM, Carlisle, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"Where there is love there is life." --Ghandi

I really like the message. I can relate.. But what is it exactly? It's not a short story.. Is it a poem? Free verse, maybe? Is it a thought or an opinion? It's jumbled and overlapped and crazy but it works because that's how we feel. Jumbled, overlapped, and crazy... The form of the entire passage is upsetting. I think it would make a loooovely free verse:) with lines/ stanzas