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It's Never the End

August 17, 2010
By Anonymous

I held him tightly as tears crept down his face in an almost solid stream, landing on his dirty blue-jeans. "You can't keep doing this to yourself!" I tried to tell him this every time.
"Jenny," His voice trailed off and I could tell how weak he felt, "I know why." The once high, squeaky voice broke.

I hated this game, Jordan would always make it hard for me to understand. "Jordan, what are you talking about?"

He looked at me with his big, emerald eyes hiding behind his too-long black hair. "Nate," I almost couldn't believe he could be talkative at a time like this, "He- he told me why."

"Why we broke up? Because you already know why." I shifted around on his Batman sheets, now speckled with blood.

"No," Jordan almost looked mad, "Why you did what I do. Why you tried to kill yourself."


The author's comments:
It's a rough copy, I might work on the rest this semester, hope it turns out.

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on Aug. 25 2010 at 8:19 pm
SamIsSmiling GOLD, Rimbey, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education." Albert Einstein

Thank you so much(: I'll deff check out your stuff!

on Aug. 25 2010 at 8:18 pm
SamIsSmiling GOLD, Rimbey, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education." Albert Einstein

Thanks, I didn't really work on it that much, I don't like the non-info I gave either :P

on Aug. 24 2010 at 2:26 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I&#039;d rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn&#039;t do.<br /> -Red Scott

Confusing, but this would make a good prolouge. Perhaps not so confusing as intriguing.It leaves a question, and that's good. Awesome job!

By the way, can you look at some of my stories, rate, and critisize? I'd appreciate that.


on Aug. 23 2010 at 6:02 am
hannahsmithy BRONZE, Beijing, Other
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im not exactly sure what happened, its a bit confusing but i actually really like it :)

on Aug. 20 2010 at 11:49 pm
SamIsSmiling GOLD, Rimbey, Alabama
10 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education.&quot; Albert Einstein

Thanks! Yeah, I've been working on it for a while and when I started it, I anticipated this being the prolouge to a book. (:

on Aug. 20 2010 at 10:30 pm
BaileyBaby13 BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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I agreed, this was really interesting. But I'm left a little confused, so I hope you continue it!,(:

on Aug. 20 2010 at 9:04 pm
SamIsSmiling GOLD, Rimbey, Alabama
10 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education.&quot; Albert Einstein

Thank you! :)

on Aug. 20 2010 at 7:22 pm
living4God BRONZE, Matthews, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;Be content with God but discontent with how you serve God.&#039;<br /> <br /> Courage isn&#039;t the absense of fear, it&#039;s the ability to do what you have to do in spite of it

it was really interesting! you should write more

on Aug. 20 2010 at 2:45 pm
SamIsSmiling GOLD, Rimbey, Alabama
10 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education.&quot; Albert Einstein

Thanks! C8

on Aug. 20 2010 at 3:17 am
LOVE IT! Keep writing(: