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What May Happen Will never be known.

September 29, 2009
By Beautifully_Broken95 SILVER, Abilene, Kansas
Beautifully_Broken95 SILVER, Abilene, Kansas
8 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
For Real!?!?

Sitting in class, writing quotes from songs on my binder. I look up and see the people , the people that make fun of me, that laugh at my expence. I loose all self-confidence. It drains from my mind, my body. Watching every movethey make waiting for them to strike at my dignity, mor whats left of my confidence. My love for school lowers, for I will not want to come as much as I did at dawn, when I awoke to the bright, shiny face of my older sister. My friends wil miss me, but we all miss something, someone. It's quite sad.
I lay lifelessly on my red comforter ion my bed, looking out my window... no one will know about this lifeless, cold, vacant body until dawn when my sisters bright shiny face turns white with fear. She looks into my vacant eyes and says, "They'll refret what they said." As she stomps pout of my room with rage, my mom comes in ad screams and my dad calls the hospital, although he knows i'm gone, gone forever. My veins are dry and my skin is cold.

Forget me. Please.

The author's comments:
I wrote this because me and my friends get pusted around in school, and no one seems to care.

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This article has 9 comments.

on Oct. 22 2010 at 3:24 pm
StephenieReneeBaker SILVER, Colorado, Colorado
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Don't promise my forever when your just going to break my heart.

wow that is so sad! But I understand where the girl you were writhing about was coming from :'(

on Oct. 19 2010 at 3:31 pm
TheGirlsGotDreams BRONZE, Cortland, New York
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This is really well written. Everytime I read your work I find myself more and more in love with your style. I know how you feel except I just get ignored and everyone acts like me and my friends aren't even there.

Em-ily SILVER said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 4:01 pm
Em-ily SILVER, Temecula, California
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this is amazing.

on Nov. 22 2009 at 10:06 pm
SerenityMine BRONZE, Not Saying, California
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Wow. That was really good! You made me feel the emotions you expressed, which is a sign of a good author.

on Nov. 11 2009 at 12:11 pm
Beautifully_Broken95 SILVER, Abilene, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
For Real!?!?

Sorry for the spelling and sentence mistakes I was typing as fast as possible on a time limit

PrincessS said...
on Oct. 16 2009 at 12:05 am
PrincessS, Bangalore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Imagination is more important than knowledge

This is brilliant, well written, it has so much depth and i can feel the pain, it brought tears to my eyes. Well written, you are wonderful...in fact while reading i even felt a chill down my spine.

on Oct. 15 2009 at 9:03 pm
LeslieAnn BRONZE, Midvale, Utah
1 article 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\\\\\"Dream as if you\\\\\\\'ll live forever, Live as if you\\\\\\\'ll die today\\\\\\\" \\\\\\\"Life is not about waiting for the storms to pass, its about learning to dance in the rain.\\\\\\\"

This left me breathless. You really make the subtletly in the story work. I think you are going places with your writing.

on Oct. 14 2009 at 7:46 pm
I'm sending this to my friend who cuts to show her this can happen!

on Oct. 11 2009 at 3:05 pm
DarkPhoenix BRONZE, Liverpool, Other
2 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make love not war

Wow this really sent a shiver down my spine, I could feel the emotion that the character was feeling, the hurt and the sense of aloneness.

You tell the reader about the emotions that the character is feeling, so they feel it too.