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What I need?

September 21, 2009
By NeverSayNever GOLD, Lumby, Other
NeverSayNever GOLD, Lumby, Other
12 articles 1 photo 34 comments

“I’m Drake,”

“So?” I raise an eyebrow at the tall brown eyed boy standing over me.

“So, I just thought-well you know,” I smile to myself as he twitches nervously.

“No, I don’t know.” I turn on my heels and head down the long hallway. But it isn’t long before the ‘Drake’ boy catches up to me. “What?” I ask, already getting bored of him.

“I was wondering…” He paused, annoying me more.

“Well? Spit it out already!” I stop and throw my hands up. Why does everyone always bug me?

“If you wanted to be friends,” He stares down at his feet. I look him over and start walking again.

“I don’t need friends,” I state knowing that he won’t give up.

“Well what do you need?” This catches me off guard. Nobody has ever asked me what I nee. So I stop and this time I’m the one looking down and my feet.

“I don’t know,” I whisper.

“That’s okay,” His sweet breath caresses my cheek. I look back up at him, questioning.

“Is it?” A crooked smile plays across his face.

“We’ll find out, together.” Then the strange boy hugged me. And from then on, Drake and I became each others need.


The author's comments:
I love to write, and was thinking about my relationship at the moment. And all I could think of was, Why hasn't he asked me what I need? Hope you like it :)

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on Feb. 5 2010 at 9:04 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

i think this is really cute & i really like it but the only thing is that it seemed kinda rushed. idk maybe its just me. good job!

on Dec. 28 2009 at 12:41 am
CanYouSeeTheCrazy PLATINUM, Cle Elum, Washington
21 articles 0 photos 125 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I know why everyone in this world is so desperate to find love.&quot; <br /> &quot;Oh yeah? Why then?&quot; <br /> &quot;Because, it&#039;s the closest thing we have to magic.&quot;

please do. i think it would be lovely to see what your take on the situation would bring. =]

on Dec. 26 2009 at 5:52 pm
NeverSayNever GOLD, Lumby, Other
12 articles 1 photo 34 comments
I wrote this with a cliff hanger for the reader to fill in the blanks of afterwards, but I might consider writing a sequel or something from years later.

on Dec. 23 2009 at 12:23 am
CanYouSeeTheCrazy PLATINUM, Cle Elum, Washington
21 articles 0 photos 125 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I know why everyone in this world is so desperate to find love.&quot; <br /> &quot;Oh yeah? Why then?&quot; <br /> &quot;Because, it&#039;s the closest thing we have to magic.&quot;

oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh, please please please write a sequel! that was such a ginormous cliffhanger, i'm hanging by my hair here...! i want to keep reading. give me something to keep reading. =]

on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:12 pm
NeverSayNever GOLD, Lumby, Other
12 articles 1 photo 34 comments
I have posted tons, they just don't get put on, it's kinda sad since i love all the other pieces better

kmblue said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 4:44 pm
kmblue, Unknown, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;To hell with sense! We&#039;re all crazy. What do we want with sense?&quot;<br /> Ernest Dowson

i really love your fiction peices. please post them! even if they are too long. ill be you dedicated reader! hahah

on Oct. 3 2009 at 3:17 am
NeverSayNever GOLD, Lumby, Other
12 articles 1 photo 34 comments
Well this was just a really short story of mine, I have started about twenty different dtories, just most are too long to post

on Sep. 29 2009 at 8:00 pm
KiraKira PLATINUM, Cardiff By The Sea, California
35 articles 0 photos 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not pity the dead, Harry. Pity the living, and above all, pity those who live without love -Albus Dumbledore

This is cute. What happens?

on Sep. 29 2009 at 7:35 pm
NeverSayNever GOLD, Lumby, Other
12 articles 1 photo 34 comments
The author of evermore is I belive to be Allyson Noel, excuse me if I mess up the spelling lol :)

LaylaViolet said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 12:04 pm
Oh, and I like the House of Night series too. I totally have Vampire Fever; and I'm not complaining :D Who's the author of Evermore? I'm really curious.

LaylaViolet said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 12:02 pm
I did, in fact, like it. Very much. It was very interesting and kinda made me laugh (is that what you were going for?) Anyhoo, I really like your fiction pieces; poetry's not really my thing. Keep writing; you're really good! :P