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August 2022 Fiction Contest: Grandpa's Cake

August 20, 2022
By blissfullsweets BRONZE, Mill Valley, California
blissfullsweets BRONZE, Mill Valley, California
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“Beautiful!” gasped Grandpa as he stared at his chocolate cake.


I cut slices for my family.


“Mmmmmm…” uttered Grandma. “Delicious!” complimented Dad. 


My face flushed pink with pride. I had spent 4 hours baking for Grandpa’s birthday. 


We all gathered around for a family photo.


“Cheese!” 


That’s when I noticed everyone’s blue teeth.


“Alyssa,” asked Dad, “What's in the cake?”


I racked my brain frantically. Eggs, flour, sugar. … blue food gel for the lettering. 


Whoa…. I had accidentally used blue food coloring instead of food gel!


My face turned crimson with embarrassment.

 

Everyone laughed. “That’s what toothbrushes are for,” declared Grandpa.


The author's comments:

Alyssa H. is an 8th grader from Mill Valley, CA. This experience occurred at age 10.

Alyssa has since recovered from her embarrassment, and now runs her own baking business. (Instagram: @alyssa_bakes_bliss)


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Afra ELITE said...
on Aug. 29 2022 at 12:04 pm
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Alyssa, this was so original!!! And also relatable!!! Keep writing!!!