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Life In 2007 for teens

September 28, 2009
By BradleyCounts SILVER, Lagrange, Georgia
BradleyCounts SILVER, Lagrange, Georgia
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Life is a grim fairytale. Our life includes the snares of friendship. Life gives us the Hatred of school. The hate of all the bad things happening. Finally we have lives full of death.

Friendship is a blind trap. Most friends lie behind your back. Some friends in the end will just backstab you. Friendship usually ends like a shot through the head. Even things that is completely irrelevant.

Most kids are terrible influences they are completely enraging. Some kids admit peer pressure. Through all this peer pressure can admit many things. All this influences the strive for acceptance. It influences drug use in young children. Finally they make you become a terrible person.

Life at school for teens is usually a terrible experience. School has to much peer pressure. The couples have too much drama witch is totally useless. There are too many popularity contests. Besides what the teacher teaches you all the school has to offer is hate.

For the life at home it won’t always be a walk in the park. You can have a lot of chores on top of all your homework. When arguments start at home they can be bottled up and explode on someone else. This is a bad way to handle your emotions because it can lead to violent outrages. Home life should be controlled in a good fair environment if it isn’t already.

Death is all around us. We have our closest family die all around us. Some of our truest friends die around us. These deaths are not held correctly you can go through the worst sadness and or hatred. All that can be said is death is coming and one of us is next.

Life isn’t always as it seems it can be a dark cloud of hate and lies. Life sometimes seems it will never come a happy ending because life turns to darkness. The only true thing is life is a grim fairytale.

The author's comments:
My teacher told me to write an essay on life based around a metaphor.Then i named it Life in 2007 for teens

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This article has 5 comments.

B.Helm said...
on Oct. 10 2011 at 2:00 pm
I loved how you put the true meaning of life in your essay. I can easily relate to it. My life isn't as easy as it may seem to others but getting through it is important. If I can make a suggestion I would put some examples of the good memmories about life and the positive way to look at it. Not everyone thinks life is this harsh, maybe people can relate more to a better look at it. Thanks for listening-B.Helm

sally12345 said...
on Apr. 17 2011 at 7:41 pm
You're supposed to offer hope to colleges and show them your potential for the future, not depress them.  Show them how you got through these issues or something.

on Oct. 17 2009 at 11:08 pm
BradleyCounts SILVER, Lagrange, Georgia
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sorry i wrote this in the sixth grade..i never proofed it..i no longer condone writing on depression i just wanted to see if it would make it on the site

stellaluna said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 6:40 pm
This seriously needs to be proofread, you have a lot of spelling errors which makes the essay sound immature. Also, you didn't explain how life is a "grim fairytale," it reads like a list of complaints.

Wordgasm GOLD said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 2:11 pm
Wordgasm GOLD, Kingfield, Maine
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