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lost

March 13, 2023
By adamchavezzzzzzzzzz, Santa Ana, California
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       its about my dad 

Onofre walk in the highschool trying to find his friends everyone was just looking at him then he see his friends with the corner of his eyes  he went up to them and ask what classes u guys have and they said “man we got the lame classes” Onofre said me to bro they all walk to classes Onofre was in class and was wondering why is he even at school but he was just thinking this is my last year and all he wanted to do was make Him family proud but he knew it was going to take a lot for that. The class go on he was just sitting there on his phone he just wanted to go back but then the bell rings and he was off to his second classes it was pe he hated pe he didn't even dress for pe and they made him pick up trash from the ground when he didn't dress he was picking up trash also the hole class he had friends in that class but they dressed up for pe one day Onofre dressed up and some kid was making fun of him Onofre never knew how to control his actions or his mindset to things like that so he went off on the kid and went up to

Him and hit him knocked  him out he obviously got in trouble for this and his mom and dad were very mad after class after that school day he went to his friends house he go a lot to his house but his friends were in gang and weren’t good friends onofre mom marie always told him something is going to happen if you keep hanging out with those boys and onofre just thought nothing of it Onofre was outside of his house on a Friday night he was just outside sinking and drinking with some

Friends and this car comes back it’s a all black car u can’t see no one in it or nothing and it was just going by slow and it came back again and starting shooting Onofre and his friends run to the backyard and got there guns and went back when it was to late already they had left and Onofre already knew who it was so

He was just waiting tell he see him again they call “homie” from SN tell

All left Onofre went back inside and go to sleep and was just thinking about what had just happen

    September 17 Onofre woke up it’s a Friday he had school so he got ready put on a white t shirt with some baggy pants and his nike Cortez’s he met up with his friends at a 7/11 by his school he was with them they were just hanging out they didint want to go

To school but they know they had to They all walk together to school and this boy was just looking at him mad doging them and they were like “oh the hell is that dawg” and no one knew him but they got over it and let it be they walk into class and all went to class Onofre walks into his class and he see this kid so he went up  to him and see “u got a problem with ur eyes or what” and he said ur the guy that jumped my cousin and Onofre didn't know what he was talking about so he said “what? What are u talking about” the kid said yea u know my cousin from u jumó

Him wirh all your friends not to long ago and he said oh yea because he a girl and talks but donst say nothing he said don’t talk about my cousin like that and Onofre said what what the f*ck  u going to do about it and walk away back to his set Onofre was mad just looking at him the belll rings and Onofre goes to tell his friends all his friends wants to beat up the kid so they went looking for him they didint find out so they all went to Danny house there were just sitting in the backyard waiting to do somthing they were bored and they wanted to play basketball Onofre was good at basketball he grow up playing it all his friends wanted to leave tho so they left home and took Onofre to his house were his mom was waiting for a big plate of food for him.

Onofre woke up that night because his friend called him and said he was on the way he said what he said yea they just beat up Danny so Onofre got ready went out side and got in the car they went to pick up Danny and they said who did it and he said “ the kid from Onofre class” so they went to his cousin house and was asking for this kid they didint knoe his name so they said what’s his friends the cousin was sraced about to cry and he said “Esteban” so they keep asking for him the cousin wouldn’t tell him we’re he was so they wait tell the nexts day at school they were looking for him at the lunch and in clases the hole

Day they didint find him or hear about him so they didint do anything but they were driving back afret that day still trying to loook for him and they saw him walking he was walking with this group of kids they all had white t shirts and big pants Onofre went up to him with all

His homie and said what u do the danny and Esteban said” I f*cked him up” and Onofre got mad and socked Esteban. Esteban blackout he was unconscious on the floor all Esteban Friends jus l runned away Onofre was not worry about him only on Esteban Onofre got back in the car they were driving danny back home they got home and Danny mom asked his the boys wanted to he eat so they all went inside and went to eat at the table they were just annoying of Esteban they didn't want to see him again they had just eat a taco that Danny mom made they had to go home so Onofre went back to his house his mom

Marie wanted to talk to Onofre he didn't know why his mom said u can’t be going out and doing all this stuff your doing no more Onofre he said I know ma pero i just go out with my

His mom was upset and mad at him but he didint know how to tell her he didint want to look like a girl in front of his friend. His mom went to sleep and he was still sitting down in his room.

Onofre was dressing all night all he wanted to do was make his mom happy but he was messing up in life he wanted to change for him and his mom not because he used to because he wants to. He got up that night went to get a drink of water his mom was asleep she was in her room onofre goes to sleep that night he wakes up the next morning he makes breakfast for him and his mom his mom was staying home that day onofre headed off to school he was tired he didint get that much sleep that night he goes to school with his friends he was late to his first class the he was just hanging out in that class they really didnt do much that day he was trying to go home he ddint want to be at school. Lunch comes and he talking to his friends how he wants to change for him and his mom and wants to get a job all his friends was happy with what he wanted to do  he was trying to get his friends to do it with him but they didint really want too they main wanted him yo do it with for him and his mom. He was just thinking about it all day he was not to sure what he wanted to get a job at or

How he was gonna make money he main just was sreesed about working and trying to do to school but he knew he had to figure it out.


Onofre's uncle texted him about a job that involved moving cars at a hotel and onofre told him he wanted to do it. The job was at night so afret school he would go home get some sleep and eat then go to job it wasnt a bad job but it wasnt the best job he was trying to see where it got hit for the better. The first night was goodit wasnt a bad job it was good his uncle didint work at the same time but he would work in the morning everyone got along with onofre he even got tips for himself.  



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