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The other side of my sister
January 29, 2013
Summary:
Like any other story this one may be common to most people and if you were to ask them how the story goes they would tell you everything including all the others that go together with it .
Cinderella a very old but common story and movie to almost everyone : with all the other different types that have been made, I’m sure almost everyone whose watched it can tell you the beginning, climax, and end.
Mysterygirl3
The other side of my sister
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This book has 7 comments.
LiraDaeris PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 7 2013 at 11:26 pm
The story seems to be doing alright, but the presentation is all over the place. When a new character speaks, they get a new paragraph. Also, in introductions, veer away from "Hello! I'm bladebla and I'm going to tell you why my life sucks!" kind of introductions. There is a very very small niche where these can actuall work, and it is usually a children's show setting. Also grammar was off. I only get down about this because presentation is key to writing a good book, and I want you to be able to get your ideas and stories out there.
Mysterygirl3 said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 4:32 pm
i would like to know if i should post another chapter or chapters please let me know
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