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Oceanic Dream

July 20, 2011
By YesThatsWhyTheyFly SILVER, Concord, North Carolina
YesThatsWhyTheyFly SILVER, Concord, North Carolina
5 articles 6 photos 12 comments

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'A house divided against itself cannot stand."-Abraham Lincoln


My best work so far!


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NickyJ BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2012 at 8:24 pm
NickyJ BRONZE, Hyde Park, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on.” ~Robert Frost

You have good mark-making. The sea horse looks lacking in detail though. Maybe add some more little touches like fins or something in the future, as it kind of looks like a waffle lol

Also think about adding more of a background to make the composition more interesting. Add some bubbles maybe, a bit of coral and sand and more values to show the depth of the water or whatever you'd like.

Good job though!